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Vocabulary Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=vocabulary}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: Strong word usage with a wide range of new words, expressions and engaging responses.; Good vocabulary and response.; default=Adequate vocabulary but little to no attempt to vary expressions or use new words.; Below average vocabulary and incorrect use of words. Difficult to understand.; Incomplete sentences or use of fragments, with repetitive or inappropriate word usage.; No attempt/irrelevant answer.; cols=50}

Grammar Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=grammar}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: No grammatical errors.; Minimal syntax errors that do not interfere with communication.; default=Frequent errors.; Multiple errors in the basic structure, which interfere with communication.; Most sentence structures are incorrect. Frequent use of infinitives with little to no use of conjugations. Not understandable unless the reader has experience with the writer.; No attempt at completing the assignment—indecipherable responses.; cols=50}

Content Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=content}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: Contextualizes subject well. Almost error-free and attempts to write like a native speaker.; Occasional errors but easy to comprehend and generally correct.; default=Frequent errors that make the writing lose its meaning. The reader needs to guess what they’re reading about. Hard to follow. Possible use of an online translator.; Frequent errors that make the piece difficult to comprehend.; Multiple errors. Many phrases are not comprehensible and the main idea is not communicated.; No attempt at completing the assignment. Topic does not fit assignment parameters.; cols=50}

Voice Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=voice}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: The writer’s distinct voice comes through in their writing. Words are used correctly to emphasize points.; The writer’s voice sometimes comes through in the assignment and the intended audience is understood.; default=The writer delivers an average voice in the assignment with a general understanding of the audience.; A weak voice throughout the assignment. Vague to little understanding of the audience.; No voice in the assignment. Little effort to understand the audience.; No attempt to complete the assignment.; cols=50}

Paper Organization Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=organization}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: Smooth flow with excellent use of transitions and proper punctuation.; An effort to use transitions. Flows well and all clauses used in the correct context.; default=Choppy—obviously translated but still comprehensible.; Redundant use of information. The language used is well below the expected level.; Wrong phrases, isolated words and uses unrelated vocabulary.; Incomprehensible—no effort.; cols=50}

Quality Score: {formmenu: 1; 2; 3; 4; default=5; 6; 7; 8; 9; 10; name=quality}/10 Remarks: {formmenu: Confident and focused writing that holds the audience’s attention with relevant details.; Focused writing with some relevant details.; default=Quality writing with limited details.; Writing is incomprehensible—no details.; Limited writing that does not adequately express or develop ideas.; Limited writing with no clear focus or theme. No attempt at completing the assignment.; cols=50}

Your writing score: {=quality+organization+voice+content+grammar+vocabulary}.