40 High-Quality Student Feedback Comments for Assignments from a History Teachers
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Positive feedback for History teachers
Research
Impressive research and use of primary sources to support your arguments.
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Analysis
You effectively analyzed the historical context and its impact on the events.
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Structure
Well-structured essay with clear topic sentences and logical progression.
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Evidence
Excellent use of historical evidence to support your claims.
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Thesis
Your thesis statement accurately captures the main historical significance of the topic.
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Connections
Strong connections made between past events and their relevance today.
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Perspectives
Thoughtful analysis of multiple perspectives on the historical issue.
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Conclusion
Your conclusion effectively summarizes the key findings and insights.
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Understanding
Your work demonstrates a deep understanding of the historical period.
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Facts
Great job integrating relevant historical facts and figures to strengthen your arguments.
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Implications
Your analysis highlights the broader implications and consequences of the events.
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Parallels
Impressive ability to draw parallels between different historical periods.
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Context
Your piece effectively contextualizes the events within a larger historical framework.
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Introduction
Well-crafted introduction that engages the reader and sets the stage for your discussion.
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Terminology
Your writing displays a strong command of historical vocabulary and terminology.
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Quotes
Your use of historical quotes enhances the credibility of your arguments.
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Accuracy
Your attention to historical accuracy and detail is commendable.
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Critical Thinking
Your work showcases critical thinking skills by challenging conventional interpretations.
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Causes
You effectively examined the causes and consequences of the historical event.
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Understanding
Your analysis demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the historical context.
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Critical feedback for History teachers
Citation Style
Remember to cite your sources consistently and follow the required citation style.
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Inaccurate
Be more careful with historical facts; there are some inaccuracies in your work.
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Interpretation
Ensure that you provide more analysis and interpretation rather than just presenting facts.
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Focus
Your work lacks a clear focus and could benefit from a stronger central argument.
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Generalizations
Avoid generalizations and provide specific examples to support your claims.
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Elaborate
You need to elaborate further on the significance of the historical event.
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Biased language
Watch out for biased language; strive for objectivity in your historical analysis.
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More Background
Provide more background information to help the reader understand the context.
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Organization
Revise the organization of your work to improve the flow of ideas.
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Conclusion
Your conclusion needs to be stronger and leave a lasting impact on the reader.
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Perspectives
Include more diverse perspectives in your analysis to present a well-rounded view.
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Grammatical Errors
Proofread your work thoroughly to correct spelling and grammatical errors.
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Primary Sources Needed
Consider including more primary source quotes to strengthen your arguments.
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Repetitive
Avoid unnecessary repetition and focus on presenting new insights.
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Alternate Interpretations
Your analysis could benefit from considering alternative historical interpretations.
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Significance
Expand on the historical significance of the events to provide a more comprehensive understanding.
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Coherence
Your work lacks coherence; make sure each section contributes to your main argument.
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Extra Context
Provide more historical context for events and individuals mentioned in your work.
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Counterarguments
Consider including counterarguments to strengthen your overall analysis.
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Style
Your writing could benefit from a more engaging and narrative style.
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Customizing to your needs
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